thedevinhiggins

Thank you for the review!

Thank you for the review!

Thank you for the review!

Thank you for the review!

Thank you for the review. Although I am no longer editing this story (I spent way too long editing it and had to find a stopping point), I will take ...

Hello! First of all, this is an adorable story! I love the characterization and the imagery, as well as the plot! There is, however, one thing I would like to ...

Thanks so much for the review! Again, I'm sorry, but I will not be editing this story more, I made myself stop editing after already spending too long on it, ...

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Thank you so much for the review! I suppose I do have an issue with imagery...although I am no longer editing this story (I had been working on this for ...

Thank you so much for the review! It is greatly appreciated!

Thank you thank you thank you for the review! I'll be sure to keep you posted on the next chapters, and I will definitely take into account what you said! ...

Thank you so much for your comments! I really appreciate it!

Thank you! I very much appreciate your cooperation! Let me know if you need anything else reviewed!

Of course @Eros! This is way better! It sounds so much more harmonious and flows better! The tone is more consistent, and still has that warm, fuzzy feeling (which I ...