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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Charlie

    This story is sooo good. The lines are all powerful and it's narrated very well. This is the best piece I've read here, so far. Keep up the good work!! ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Queen Bee [Part One]

    Hello everyone! Thank you for the reviews. I did some editing on this piece and I'd be glad if you check this piece again if there have been improvements. Also, ...

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Dear Mr. Rapist

    This is awesomely mad. This is a perfect piece for a monologue, for someone who wants to join a Talent Show. I don't think I could write a better piece ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: God's Love

    I couldn't argue anymore about this poem. All I can say is, "Amen". Keep inspiring your readers! :)

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dear Nate,

    Sweet!!:) That's all I can say. *grins

    Jun 23, 2011


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman