thebookworm

I'm actually basing this off an sb. Thank you!

I'm going to switch the point of view between the characters.

Thank you! Any suggestions?

This is my first rough draft. I would like your opinion!

I reread like you asked. I like it more wth detail. It's really great. Good job! Keep on writing!!!!!!

That's okay. I haven't worked on it yet. I need to, I'm just so busy!

Thanks. I'll work on that.

thank you. I will work on it shortly!

I worked on it. I don't know what to change the second verse to, though.

Thanks! I'll work on it.

Thank you. What do you suggest I should swicth " He hurtled a bush" with?