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thebluegemini

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Last Moments

    This is so beautiful that I almost cried. I love the fact that you have written it from the dog's point of view. Its so touching. I can relate to ...

    Wed Apr 23, 2014 8:15 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Midwest in Summer

    I love it! I love the usage of imagery. GREAT JOB! I can almost see the entire thing right infront of my eyes. Its a visual treat! I would totally ...

    Wed Apr 23, 2014 8:09 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Unstable chapter one

    Ok. WOW. Just WOW. Can I say I absolutely LOVE it! The ending was absolutely brilliant. Amazingggg! Emerson is now my dream prince! We all want one, don't we? ^^ ...

    Wed Apr 23, 2014 7:42 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dark Pain

    I love it! I love the usage of imagery. GREAT JOB! I can totally relate to it and that's why I love it! My favorite phrase is : "What could ...

    Wed Apr 23, 2014 7:16 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Insomnia

    Can I just say I LOVE IT! Its amazing. I can totally relate to this and that's what makes it really special. The emotions and the words you have used ...

    Wed Apr 23, 2014 7:11 am


Anger is an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it is stored than to anything on which it is poured.
— Mark Twain