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Re: Betrayals
the stanza about spelling/grammar/knowledge was the intro, saying basically how the speaker may know very little about these basic rules of life but (as the rest of the poem goes ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Future Sisters-in-laws, stay back!
PROS: --great opening, really caught my interest --the rhyming and tone of the poem is very cool, humorous TO WORK ON: --referencing people/things that readers wouldn't get takes away from ...
Aug 7, 2011