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Re: Monster.
Thank you! I will definitely PM you when I post more. I'm writing some now!
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: Monster.
Why does this have only two stars?? You need to get more people to review your writing. I like this a LOT more than your other story. So... six platinum ...
Sep 2, 2009 -
Re: Ruthless. [Edited!]
Let me comment on the plot. It's very mysterious and I'm very intrigued by how it's going to continue. What I would say is that the flow is sometimes jarred ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Ruthless.
Ahhh, your reply made me smile! Thank you very much! I'm going to continue this, possibly write the first chapter before I go to sleep. =D It's thats classyy x, ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Monster.
Hi, This was very good. You keep the reader interested and describe the character well. You make it easy to feel somewhat what the character is feeling. ...and he mind ...
Aug 28, 2009
