thatoddkid

I've got to agree with Firestarter on several points. I'll try to expand on a couple of those things, namely the opening line, repetition, and diction. It caught my eye—spark, ...

I feel as though, due to my pitiful experience with and knowledge of poetry, that this review deserves the following explanation, and so I’ll try to make it as brief ...

I was desperately looking for things to review, about *this* far away from reviewing poetry, and then I found this. Let's just say you have my eternal gratitude. Before I ...

Normally, I’d just tell you how awesome you were in a sentence or two so I could actually review. But what you did here: The first one I took down ...

I’ll start with some nitpicks. It's a kind of quiet plague, no one dares hear it except him, but it shows. It shows through under eye circles and blank expressions, ...

Hmm. Very interesting. I'm very curious as to what you plan to do with this. I can guess, actually, and if I'm right, I find this to be quite pleasing. ...

We were made of titanium, so divorces and dance teachers who expected the impossible and tired fingers that couldn't move fast enough over the bow and mothers who spent her ...

That was fantastic. I'll start this review by saying there were quite a few grammatical errors, but it looks like everyone else got them all. Or most of them. Second, ...

I seem to be the only one with a problem (two), so take everything I have to say with a grain of salt. First, this doesn't sound like a letter. ...

I really liked this chapter. *nods* There was my father, his shirt and pants perfectly ironed, his hair perfectly coifed yet his perfect life shattered. -This sounds really condescending. Like ...

This is more of a response/analysis than a review. But I feel as though I owe you something for all the amazing reviews you've been doing, and I think I'd ...

So when I said, "I'll review this by Sunday," I'm glad I didn't specify which one... But I said I would, so even though I'm short on time and any ...

Looks like I'm finally here. I don't have time to read the other reviews, so I'm sorry if I repeat anything. ...You put me to shame. But I won't gush, ...

I really, really, really want to review this right now. But I just don't have the time, so this is me reserving a space. But I will say that my ...

I don't get along with poetry. So please ignore anything that sounds odd to you, because I have no idea what I'm talking about. Night confronted her adversary, Intrepid, A ...