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Re: That Night
It was good, but I agree with the others...Lining was terrble. Got me cofused really...Yer gonna wanta check that... Death
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Race
Hmmm...You definetly will need to check on puntuation and such...(ignore possible(probably is) bad spelling right now...I is in a hurry...). It's good, but a little sloppy, so you might want ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Standing Still
Sheesh. Seems like Tamora pretty much covered everthing huh? So I guess you'll just have to listen to her...I like it...A lot...Seeing I love negative vibes and everythings, but don't ...
May 13, 2008
