tgham99

Thanks so much for your review! Punctuation is most definitely an aspect of poetry that I'm experimenting with; your suggestion about how it can provide a sense of closure in ...

Thank you so much for your review! I definitely struggled with wordiness and punctuation has always been confusing for me when it comes to determining how I want to structure ...

@-BlackThorne- Thank you for your review! I actually intentionally left it without punctuation with the intention (or hope, rather) that it would convey a sense of jagged disconnection/jarringness (if