teardrops

budding writer: Thanks so much for all the kind comments, much appreciated! Myles Wong: Wow, a lot of info here :) Thanks for pointing out the spelling mistakes; I've gone ...

Sohini: Thanks for leaving a comment! Yeah, I was a little worried about Krum acting a little OOC, but there's less to work with in terms of him. deafwriter_19: Thank ...

ambercoultis: Thank you :) melanie21: Thanks. Glad to have moved you slightly from your dislike of Krum ;) purple_star: Semi-colons are fun to play around with. The child was just ...

WriterAddict12356: If you're not sure what a songfic is, go google the definition. "Bad. Horrible..." is hardly considerable as a critique, and in no way can be construed as constructive ...

Aedomir: Thanks for pointing out the tense change, and for the compliments! :) Saint Razorblade: Yep, pretty new to YWS. Wow, I got you first fanfic crit here; I'm honoured; ...

Ooh, this is really nice! Good use of adjectives, good flow. I espeically like the last lines, how the world comes "alive in our eyes". Beautifully done.