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Excuse me, while I retire to a desolate room and scream the heavens: That was beyond ingenious and brilliant. I can't think of a word to sum it up. I ...

I am loving this story - being totally obsessed with this topic...I tend to write fan-fictions like this, but I'm afraid to post them for fear of being mocked for ...

GAH! As said before, no-one (or only the strong-willed) will read this thoroughly. There's way too much Netspeak! And it's all down to the format of your posts, meaning novels ...

You know, it would be better to put this in another genre. You could classify this a slight, short biography, but (and don't take this the wrong way)... Netspeak may ...

You're writing a full-length novel, now are you? Well, good luck with that. I can't actually critique. I am a little confused, but since it's only part of the novel ...

Whoa. This is some remarkable stuff, CLARICE *evil laugh* Many people believed that it was homed to a monster. Shouldn't this be ..." home to a monster", hm? Yet again ...

I like it. It had great clarity, apart from the switch to the latter in Marianne's life. Is she still the same age? I feel there needed to be something ...