taliarose

The first line of each stanza were very good. The repetition added to the poem. I love your comparison between man and puppet. I think it does say quite a ...

Very cutesie, but still very good. The sentence you used at the beginning was a perfect hook to the story. I really like how it is pretty short and to ...

Great poem! I loved your storyline. It isn't easy to make a poem into a story, but this is a very good example of one. You do have punctuation and ...

I wouldn't guess that you are no poet because this is really good! The words are very powerful and they actually make complete sense to me. I think you should ...