taimur

that was cool...uyou started off really well and the manner in which you began, it feels like the author can relate to his subject... though, the ending could have been ...

the melody part was like its thing that is precious and that is original from man's age of innocence......and it has magical powers but i all comes wid a sacrifice....

i dont know either about the book nor abt the tragedy....but nice the way u explained the space of last few sentences...howevr, do concontrate on ur spellings n ur tenses...improve ...