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Re: Rice
Hey Noor, I really liked your story! First of all, all of your historical facts were used correctly. Second, I liked it because it was exciting, and entertaining to read. ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: The way of Buddha
Hey Ayden! I really liked your story first of all. All of your vocabulary was correct, and you started a new paragraph every time there was dialogue. I wonder if ...
Mar 9, 2016 -
Re: Ocean of Nothing
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Mar 1, 2016
Hey Garrett! So I thoroughly enjoyed your story! I thought that it was very interesting, and detailed. I liked all the characters in the story, especially the captain! The ending ... -
Re: Ocean of Nothing
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Mar 1, 2016
Hey Garrett! So I thoroughly enjoyed your story! I thought that it was very interesting, and detailed. I liked all the characters in the story, especially the captain! The ending ...