sworddance

Thanks all for reviewing =D Seraph--

ashleylee--thanks for reviewing =D I've been meaning to reply but I kept getting sidetracked lol Sorry if the long sentences made you twitch haha it's a thing of mine, I ...

Esme I could hug you XD Thanks for taking the time to pick this apart--it was pretty hastily written and I think you hit dead-on a couple of the things ...

heya :D I just realized I'd been neglecting my own threads and popped on to post the next part hehe well, Shadow, thanks for reading, anyway! rofl well I personally ...

ROFL I'm DANCY now??? Ok, 'sword' was fine, heck, I'll take 'dance', but DANCY??? Seraph, I know where you live... On topic, however- when do we get the next part? ...

Hi :D I'm back for the edited version! ^.^ I see you got rid of the beheading; that's good, first of all. Less confusion for sworddance... rofl Anyway, the first ...

Hi again :D looking over the edits, I'd say you did a pretty good job fixing those things. Congrats- so, now that you've edited a bunch and stuff, when do ...

*double-take* Whoa! Transformation! Your avatars never cease to amaze! ...oh, the story? meh... well, it's a little different.... rofl j/k :mrgreen: Honestly, waaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy different. And be

Hey Shadow- me again :D I promise this one will be short and sweet. I just came back and looked at this again, and I saw what you'd done with ...

Right then Shadow, I'll be sure to insert some typos for you! And I'm really glad to see not everyone thought that about Cloasia... that was disturbing enough without it ...

Thanks for the review guys :D To answer your questions, no, I don't ride horses. It's a friend of mine who is the closest thing to a horse expert that ...

Thanks for the crits everyone. :D I'm glad the whole taping thing didn't go over everyone's heads. I was hoping people would be familiar enough with the whole athletic training ...

Ah, ok. Then feel free to ignore my comment about that bit, then. =P

Hey, thanks for the reviews everybody :D And JC, you're definitely right about that "which (witch!)" thing; the second 'which' shall most likely be changed to a 'that', or I ...

You're supposed to not know what she's talking about with the horse :twisted: muhahahahaahaaaaa.... *ahem* thanks for reviewing =D I appreciate it. I'll have a look at your work, too, ...