sweetrapturedlight

This was very emotional and deep, and I can empathize with it completely. I only see a few errors that could be fixed. 1. Cannot is one word. 2. The ...

Okay, first of all, I really like this. I like the way you used words like "Twas" and "Ev'ry". It made the song seem more like something you'd find in ...

This is very good and relatable. I like the way you aligned the text in the 3rd and 5th paragraphs towards the right; it makes it a little more interesting. ...