sweetjane

This is very interesting. I hope the story goes in a direction which aims to be truthful and spits at cliche. You could have a story about education and empowerment ...

I love your second paragraph- don't cut it. Just insert between the first and second paragraphs one expanding the player. I feel like this poem could be two as you ...

This gives me so much inspiration for pictures (Im a photographer). However, I had to read it twice to get it because the formatting is done weirdly. Like half of ...