sweethearts

Hi, thanks for your lovely review. Yes, that was on purpose. :) It would be nice if you could review the first chapter and prologue of my new novella :)

Hey Noelle, I loved reading your story, your idea was very original adding romance to an adventure. Please PM me when you post chapter 2, i really can't wait to ...

thanks for your advice, to be honest, this was a school project on multiculturalism and i didnt have any short stories to post on YWS so i used this. Maybe ...

Thanks for your review and i am very glad that you like it! Would you like me to PM you when i post Chapter two? The sudden tense change or ...

i liked your prologue of the novel and i think it is an excellent beginning. there is a lot of places where the reader has to infer and yes, i ...

I think your peom is beautiful, it seems delicate yet very strong at the same time. I really enjoyed reading it and it is very captivating and draws me in ...