sweetcandycanes

Hello. This is a really interesting piece of poetry. I love the wording and the imagery of the poem. You used a lot of commas, but other than that.. Not ...

Hello. This is a really inspiring song. If this was a hit, i would listen to it all day. Keep up the good work!

Hello. This is a wonderful poem. It makes me think about the person I want to be with, with the rest of my life. You should be a poet. You ...

These are good lyrics. I can actually hear the music in my head and I can hear how the person sings it. :D