supriya

Yes, I have felt that feeling! Great writing! I wonder if you're talking about feeling trapped in a relationship, household, situation etc in the first few verses? Also, I think ...

Hello, this is very emotional and touching. I sympathize with the feelings of abandonment and betrayal from mine and this spoke to me. I think you should make some changes ...

I love the idea and the story you're telling. The idea of seeing a light but getting darkness upon reaching it speaks to me. And it gives me the idea ...