sunwater

In the beginning you could had a more of a scene about the hitting because it took me two times to see the sentence " I flinch slightly as he ...

In the stillness of the lonesome night, nothing seemed to move. Her movements were short and curled together as the darkened water’s torrents. The woods had a mist to them; ...

This is a very moving piece of writing on how in depth you go and you show great skill writing your work.

I'm sorry but when I read the first part i get this feeling that it is years a part like they use Foil and the Gen go to Avery’s Academy ...

“Alexei!!! stop pulling the poor girls legs you only just met her… come to think of it you haven’t met her at all!!” a girl of about 18 years old ...

Pulling my little black car into Charlie's driveway, I saw that only Bella was home, the obscure police car that Charlie insisted on driving everywhere not in its usual spot. ...