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  • Article / Essay » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The Shakes

    as i stalk the outskirts of the green room, i find something intriguing, prompting me to keep reading. and reading. and reading. until the end! i think this might have ...

    Apr 29, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Atoms

    this is really good! it doesn't seem to have a genre, but it kept my interest until the end with the pleasant rhyme scheme and overall light mood. it gives ...

    Apr 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I Mourn the Loss of Innocence

    *warning for strong opinion and overall monotone, i'm sure others would like this poem* i find this to be a very cliche poem-- i've seen quite a lot of 'loss ...

    Apr 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A God's Eyes

    this review is probably going to contain a lot of adjectives. anyway. this is a metaphor that i rarely see in stories, and you only needed the title to grip ...

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Spiritual Re: I can't

    i did enjoy this short-- spiritual stuff never fails to catch my attention and, for some reason, makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside whenever i finish reading. now, since ...

    Feb 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Cursed Water (HP Fanfic)

    this was quite a worthwhile read, it being short, sweet, and fanfiction of harry potter! many points described the original characters' personalities quite well, with draco's swinging loyalty based on

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Redemption

    i know it's sort of pointless to comment if i didn't read the entirety of an entry, but for some reason i'm doing it nonetheless. first of all, i appreciate ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 1

    i am now officially hooked on your story, and will eagerly await the next installment. just a couple things, however. i know that you learn more about the setting and ...

    Feb 21, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Diary of a Deicide, Part One.

    i have to say that your story is a breath of fresh air. i haven't read stories quite as descriptive and unique as this. but, i have little to no ...

    Feb 20, 2015


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