summerlovee

Definitely keep writing this!! No bad comments to write. When you write the next chapter write on my wall and I will review it!!

Great! I read the first one and so far loving it!! Sorry I have no errors I found in here so I can't really help you... but I really like ...

Beautifully writtern really although I felt sorry for Nate xD Nice Keep writing ~

:O Nice~ This was really good and so was the descriptions I liked it when she just gived up and decided to accept the change xD

WOW! I am jealous not about the whole heartbreaking part but the love part the descriptions you used were so real and breathtaking It carried a lot of emotional baggage ...

HAHA! I love it when David says we aare family and it's like 'don't ask' xD Very well writtern like the previous ones I look forward to reading more (:

WOW!!! This is clearly personal and writtern from the heart! I really like this its absolutely brilliant! Nice~

WOOHOO! Naddie and Marky!! Yes everything worked out perfectly :D Nothing to correct (: Its a shame its going to end :'( D:

HAHA! I couldn't stop laughing at the Sean part xD Its light, funny and casual the way a diary should be and reminds me of you know the series Angus, ...

Well wow! Your story lines arent the old original ones, how do you come up with these ideas? I was really impressed, again!

The best ever! Oh my god I didn't see that coming! But Marky and Naddie are together, i hope :D I loveee these chapters (:[

Holy shit. Excuse my langauge How in the world did you write that! Its so good! Excellent, brilliant. No complaints! :D

:O What a mysterious house! That is so creative, I don't know how you thought of that! Great (:

Hey, this was so good (: I read the ones before and Im very curious on what happened in this house (:

This was good and I look forward to reading more of this! I have no bad comments to add. I don't know about grammar because I was too absorbed in ...