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Re: Please, just stop
Um well it is awkward if I say you should continue it, but you should. Not for wrong reasons but for the fact that I am simply amazed that you ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: All My Fault (Capter 1)
This is good! I really enjoyed it. But just a little thing, I think the characters need a little more depth. How about just desribing them more. Other than that ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: One Year Social Experiment of a Teenager Chapt. 3
I read your thing about how you aren't goin to post chapter four until three gets a proper review so here i am because if you don't post chapter four ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Paint Me Again, Love Me Again
OMG!!! Is it me or is every story you write just so fantastic and eveything!!! I am lost for words that describe this! Literally, please get your works published (: ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Love Suite THE FINAL TWO CHAPTERS
NOOOOOOO!!!!! Oh my god maybe for you next story just a suggestion maybe do Maja when shes grown up :D But marky and Naddie :D YAY!!!! Bye bye love suite ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: We All Are Birds. (Chap. 3)
Very good. You have quite a talent of suprising me xD When Oliver came back to his grandparents’ house, he was careful to quietly open and close the door so ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: We All Are Birds. (Chap. 2)
I liked this story a lot :D The downtown of Williamstown, Massachusetts was only a few blocks long. The only places for teens to hang out were Mario’s Pizza Palace, ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: What Girls Want~part one
I quite like this (: It was very rushed though. A triangular prism with the height of 48, the width of 12, and the length of 72. What is the ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Love Suite Chapter 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, and 13!!
Excellent, it was truly beautiful just like the other chapters. I am beginning to dislike Ronnie! Marky should be with Naddie!! :D Sorry Im just a passionate fan :P I ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: We All Are Birds. (Chap. 1)
This was really good He wiped his brow as sweat dribbled down his forehead. The air was humid and sticky, he was lounging out on the front porch steps listening ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Love Suite Chapter Five, Six, Seven and Eight!
HOLY SHIT! GO NADDIE :) I love that girl. Im not going to correct anythiung because you seem to do fine on your own, more than fine! Sorry for the ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Encased in a little, black, velvet box
This story was a good read but a few mistake here and there. Today is the best day of my life! I think he is going to propose. No.. No ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: No. 16
A very good poem, I think. I couldn't understand half of it xD It's raining, So I'll stay inside, and write of the world external, battered by the deluge, knocking ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: One Happiness
This story was very good and I'm a tomboy too xD I know it's random, but i just wanted to say it (: It’s the last day of school. Sunlight ...
Feb 28, 2011