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Re: Time of Our Lies (Chapter One)
I am already in love with this! Its a story of stupid teenage boys and their partying and stuff! This is exactly the sort of writing I like!!! No bad ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: The Vampire Upstairs
OMG!! This is so good. It's funny while actually making sense :D Also it has a very casual type of writing that I really like :D I absolutely loved it ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: The fallen
This was good, a good start. But there were a few problems with this. I feel as if this is rushed and it's not in detail like Hey!" I said, ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: When I Fell Pregnant [August]
FINALLY! She gave birth, but this novel still has to go on!!! :D Ooh Tomas :P Thats cute if she wasn't married with 2 kids xD Pleasee keep writing them ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: The Adventures of Felix Van Doren
This is so good! I like the whole plot the script is based on. Its confusing but for me it held a certain interst to make me read it about ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: One and One Make Two.
This poem is amazing. If only I could have writtern it :l Anyways I really liked this part: Out of the corner of my eye, I see you. In the ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Spring
I really like this poem!! Althpugh some of the reason is because my birthday is in spring xD I love how you describe the nature wonders that happen on spring ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter three
Sonny? Wait who's that? Haha sorry I am not good at remebering name xD This was really good, not boring. Like always Cassie annoys me and now I am starting ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter two
Ooh Harriet and Aiden? That is cute I think they are going to be together :P Cassie sounds like a stuck up b****h! I don't like how she treats Harriet. ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Lost Keys
I hate Marcus!! What a thing to say when you first review huh? xD But I do hate him D: I mean Jeffrey and Samantha were like how you described ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: No Rest For The Wicked~1
Ok this story was good, but there was some parts I didn't understand. First of all she sounds like a ordinary juvie girl and then she kills someone? Like maybe ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: What Remains in my Memory
His eyes; they were the only things that shone through all the crowds of smoking people. The taste of champagne in my mouth went sweeter than it should have been, ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Through the Mist - Two
Omg! That is so sweet, finally gig talked with Kethry and found out he was alive! That was a good conclusion to the chapter (: I likes the dialogue between ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: When I Fell Pregnant [July]
This month was absolutely funny xD Just one thing though, I have never seen a octagonal shape swimming pool xD Aww it was sweet when she told her dad how ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1
Ross Taylor His face was relaxed, but there was something about it, that made me uncomfortable. Something that hadn’t been there before. Something my mind had made up. This is ...
Mar 23, 2011
