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Thank you!! I hope so too!! ^_^ Thanks for the reviews both of you..jack and beyond the mask!

Hahaha! The last thing “No thanks,” She said, gesturing with her hands as well, as though I was deaf. “But you, I’d like to advice you to take up dance ...

Oh....well I'm really confused right now!! Some people are saying it rhymes too much and some people that it isn't rhyming properly!! I'm really confused !! By the way..thanks cris,fun4eva ...

Thank you!

Thanks Jannie!! :D

Thanks a lot for the reviews matt,writer_ally and lord anzius!!I have re-written the poem keeping in mind what yuhave suggsted(i tried to anyway!).How do you like the poem now?

To those it may concern: This is a religious poem please don’t let that be your basis for your critique ------------------------------------------- I am lost and more lonely then before He ...

WOW!! its like i can imagine my self in the characters shoes perfectly.well....not exactly but yea the emotions you described are so true to every crush!!good work!