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Re: 4 a.m.
Hello my friend! Here's a short review for you! ;) I really enjoyed this poem! There is only a few things I noticed... For some lines you only had one ...
Nov 8, 2013 -
Re: Fear of the Fall
Wow! This is really touching, as well as confirmation! Recently I hiked up a mountain and the whole time I thought of how I need to rely upon God more ...
Nov 7, 2013 -
Re: Pain
Hello Fellow Friend! The poem is a beautiful description. Unfortunately, this poem is a fragment... If you add the two commas suggested by the other fellow reviewer then it will ...
Nov 5, 2013 -
Re: Secrets
Hey there fellow writer! I love this short poem! It's very short, but it gets the point across very efficiently! I would just say that perhaps you could take out ...
Nov 5, 2013 -
Re: Couplet Poem; Love
Hi SecreteJournalist! This is very good! :) It's quite short, but it does describe love perfectly! I enjoyed reading your poem. Other than making it a little bit longer, I ...
Nov 5, 2013