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Grammar first :) It should be "Or the heavens ever deny the soul THEY save?" or you could do "Or heaven ever deny the soul it saves?" "Saphire" and "whishing" ...

We’d gone swimming in the waters until our skin mimicked raisins This was my absolute favorite :D I could be reading it wrong in my head, but something seems a ...

"My dear," Hell said, "come closer now," the virgin girl complied. He stained her skin like bloody rags in his lustful devil-eyes. First of all, that's just plain genius. AMAZING ...

There are a few things I want to nitpick at... First of all, the third stanza is the only one that doesn't rhyme. You could have it rhyme or avoid ...