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The fourth stanza particularly, I would break that stanza into three or possibly even four lines. I wouldn't have thought of its a good thing you thought of it for ...

...I fell in love with Levin...he just had all those...agricultural reports and stuff.

Poor Imp: Thanks! haha I was saying Karen- eena !

I love this book. I'm a huge Thomas Hardy fan, and this is my favorite written by him. I did a book report on it last year. Gabriel Oak is ...

something – merely misshapen, mishandled and now appearing similar, no longer dis- At first I thought, "what?!" So then I proceeded to read the poem over a few more times. ...

“Grandma…” The little blue eyes of Lulu changed to a crimson rage. I don't know whether you were leaning towards horror or humor here, but...the image made me giggle.

That was pure mastery. 'Twas puzzling, because it doesn't seem like much of an ode, though it is strange how that bothers me more than a squirrel carrying a duffel ...

Posted a slightly revised version.

Well, if it's an assignment...turn it in as is and your teacher will still be extremely impressed! Hehe...though it seems far too complex an idea to be for school. Is ...

Ah, yes, you lost me- not from boredom, but because your dialogue needs some work. SOME BASIC TIPS: 1. Your characters don't need to say 'eh' constantly. It's, eh, kind ...

Well, I loved that piece. Especially the last paragraph, how, although slipping back out from the speech, is connected and relevant. I thought the image of of the classmates filing ...

Very stylish and disturbing, but uh...what's your point?