starrynight89

hello tn, Thanks for the review, I will fix the grammatical errors. I'm planning on editing this later (again) but thanks for the input. :) *starry

hey Aedomir, Thank you so much for the wonderful review! Eek, I thought I had caught most of those tiny grammatical errors.. anyway, your insight was extremely helpful. I went ...

Thank you so much Trombonist for the review! :) You actually brought it back. Yes, the MC is humorous but also shy..hope that came through. The girl is fun-loving and ...

Thank you for the insight Stella! So kind of you to review :D --starry

Thanks Geek, you are too kind! Yes, the MC's name is Rohan (male) and he is visiting India over the summer. :) Yes, I'm trying not to use many I's. ...

Hey sassylady333, Thank you so much for the review! :) I'm glad you like my MC. I feel kind of bad for posting this because, I should've checked over my ...

Squallz, Thank you for your comment! And you seemed to have caught my weakness: characterization. It's just hard so, I've decided not to post anymore until I've gotten to know ...

Thanks the kind words bbb!! This draft is far from perfection but, I'm glad you think it's really good!! Bye, --starry.

Eek! Sorry for the double post, how did that happen? Oh and you're welcome! :D

Part Two cont. In the store there was only a few people. I had been telling the truth about finding a book. I needed to find one by Monday and ...

Hey there, Just thought I'd leave a review! You seem like a newbie so welcome to YWS! PM with any questions, comments or concerns regarding my review. Take Care, --starry ...

Thank you so much for review, kokobeans! And I tried to fix the mistakes...anyone else?

Thanks for the review Bigbad! And I understand what you mean about getting the MC's thoughts out more..thanks again!

Big bad, nice one..didnt really look into spelling but: Prophesy-->Prophecy! Other than that: nice plot and I agree with mantis, show us, dont tell us. Keep going!

Thank you all for your feedback..I totally forgot about the gender issue..oops..will change it immediately..again, thank you so much! :)