starryknightt

Thank you so so much for the feedback. I really appreciate it.

Thanks so much! I have seen those grammar mistakes you mentioned. I think it's because I did this during a fifteen-minute word race with a friend haha. I will be ...

Thank you so much!

John's face would have been PRICELESS! Thank you so much for all of the compliments. Maybe I'll get around to writing more of this sometime.

Lol I'm glad! Thank you!

Hey! I liked this. It's well written. The only thing I suggest is to keep your question marks consistent, but that's not a huge deal. Anyway, the last line is ...

Okay, so, I sectioned it off kind of? Does this work for you?

Thanks for bringing this to my attention. What is the ideal length of a chapter on here? I really just copy and paste my chapters from google docs.

Yes, Star works fine :) Thank you! I'll be publishing chapter two today and I really hope you'll stop by and read it! Your review means a lot. I can't ...

Oh my goodness thank you!! This means so much to me. I really do hope you keep reading because things are about to get much more exciting!