stargazer9927

That was cute. But the girl must have been a really big nerd. But I'm not one to be talking because all my friends are nerds. I'm a nerd but ...

Okay the first thing I would like to say is I think you're an amazing writer. Your word use and just the way you write is so professional and amazing. ...

Well first of all to answer your question yes I think this is going somewhere and you should write more. But I can also see that it needs a lot ...

I'm not a huge fan of poetry because I think people over do it to the point where I can't really understand it. I like the type of poetry that's ...

I liked it. It was the type of poetry that I can understand and really like. I don't like commenting on poetry, because I personally don't think I know anything ...

It's a great start. My problem when I read novels is that I'm very picky. I feel that if I'm going to sit there for ten to twenty minutes reading ...

Nice. It's not that long, but it sure got my attention. I think you could make this into something more. It's definitely a good start. Unless you intended to keep ...

I thought this sounded very interesting, but it could use a lot of work. The number one thing that bothered me were all the grammer mistakes. When you get the ...

I really like this poem. It's so true! But I think you can do a little more with it. I don't really know how to explain it. It just seems ...

That was such a cute story and I loved it. It was definitely entertaining enough. Grammar is my biggest pet peeve. You didn't have too big of a problem with ...

I loved that post. I believe that he died for me too, so it was fun to read. You don't see much of that on here. But just one question, ...

It's kind of misleading at first. With the emotion that you were putting into it I thought maybe it was a love poem. But then at the end I realized ...

I really liked this poem. I'm not a huge fan of poetry that I can't really understand, and that's most poetry in general. I guess I can understand it but ...

I think it was very well written and can definitely be a great poem. I'm not sure if this is just my opinion or not, but I always thought poems ...