springs616

Once again, another good chapter, and an interesting development in the plot. I've got some corrections, as usual, but I quite enjoyed it. She’s dead. And you will be too ...

This was really good. I'm not sure if there was a time gap between this and the last chapter's writings or if you're just getting more into it, but I ...

I thought it was pretty good, overall. Here are a few little grammar nitpicks that I have: “Hey Dunbar! You lazy sack of crap do you have those sales numbers ...

I really like the idea behind this. Anytime someone can write about something from a creative perspective, I'm on board. The writing is also pretty good, although there are a ...

I like it. Lots of feelings, some inherent vagueness about it to make it universal. The only thing I'm curious about that you didn't quite clarify--facebook? Why is it dear ...

This is definitely an interesting idea, and I would love to see it brought to a short story or, even better, a novel. However, there are some problems I have ...

I really like this poem, and I think with a little revision it could be excellent. The topic is intriguing, and what got me to click on this poem in ...

First off, let me say that I really like the mood of the story. I always thought there was something fresh about social satire mixed with fictional supplementary information, such ...

It's great to see how much progress you've made with this in the past few months. It's excellent! The new beginning is definitely much faster and better at getting the ...

Okay, so the general story was good, but there are a lot of grammar/composition errors here which detracted from full enjoyment of the story. I'll try to mention as many ...

First of all, I would like to say that you are an awesome writer and that I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your book. Being an aspiring novelist ...

I like the plot of this work, and the way you set up the sequence of events to lead to the ending was well done. It seems that a lot ...

First of all, let me just say that I am in love with this story! Your satirical views on the Bush administration, as well as life in general, were fantastic, ...

I like it. For something that you just randomly thought of, it's pretty good, although usually that is how poetry works, now, isn't it? lol The only major problem that ...

First of all, I like the theme, but it seems like it would have been better suited to poetry, probably becuase of its length and the fact that it's more ...