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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Five Bars in Rome: Letter to an American Soldier

    Wow. That was so amazing. You have the most wonderful ability for capturing real and honest emotion in fiction, and some people just can't do that. I felt as if ...

    Jun 10, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: deleted

    Hey! Okay, I'm not going to critique your story paragraph by paragraph like Monki...I'm more about the idea behind it and the plot than the grammar. I think that it ...

    Jun 10, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Powers ::4::

    Wow. At first, with the whole potato and meat ration thing, I wasn't sure where you were going with it and I was like, ummm....but wow. That was really well ...

    Jun 10, 2008


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