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Wow. That was so amazing. You have the most wonderful ability for capturing real and honest emotion in fiction, and some people just can't do that. I felt as if ...

Hey! Okay, I'm not going to critique your story paragraph by paragraph like Monki...I'm more about the idea behind it and the plot than the grammar. I think that it ...

Wow. At first, with the whole potato and meat ration thing, I wasn't sure where you were going with it and I was like, ummm....but wow. That was really well ...