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Re: saturday night
I actually really liked that. However, I must exercise my evil teacher-ness by saying that you need to control yourself a bit in the writing area. For instance: Not like ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: The dusty road
I like it so far. I almost said it's flowing nicely, but not completely. Now, maybe it's just my imagination, but it sounds a little choppy. I get like that ...
Apr 12, 2007
