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Re: My Desert Rose
This is a very good piece of writing. what you need to do is read and make it longer. Then it will help you to get inspiration. Then you can ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Harry Potter fanfic: Dumbledore vs. Grindelwald
That was very intresting. You may wish to write more. But I think you should listen to the others. then write more. If not, then there is no use for ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: As Lovely as it Saeems
it was well done. a bit too short. you might want to make it longer. also include more expression. that is all you need to work on. space
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Seedpaw's Fight
that chapter was interesting. what show is this form? otherwise you did well. space
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Fantasy Reporter
That was LOL funny! no grammar mistakes or spelling. and you just need to interview harry's wand! space
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Get over it my friend ch 1
it was interesting. The plot was good, but have more romance. the grammar was, good. you just need a little more romance. space
May 6, 2008