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Re: The Vampire Lord Must Die
Okay. Wow. It sounded, like he was getting pleasure from her cutting him. I mean in a way thats a little twisted, but okay fine. She's killing him, the vampire ...
Jul 18, 2012 -
Re: Darkness
You really need to work on your grammar, and spacing. "resolveash she realized,no" is not a sentence. Your going to confuse the reader, and it then end up as someone ...
Jul 18, 2012 -
Re: A sad Facebook love story chapters one to two
Like tgirly said, the format is unique. But I think to keep your readers interested, you need to have more of a plot, instead of just ''me''- ''him''. I've seen ...
Jul 18, 2012