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Was this the story you were talking about? Anyway, here I am! Okay... I will say that the first part of this was absolutely wonderful. Amazing, practically perfect in every ...

ARGH! I hate my computer! I just typed up a big old response to this, and them my computer deleted it. :evil: Well, what I saw, abbreviated, was this: thanks ...

Um... wow. That's all I can say. Well, okay, maybe not all. I also have a question: is this based on a true story? It really has that feel to ...

Wow - that was great. I loved the overall tone of the piece, and the dialogue was very realistic. I really liked the quiet strength (cheesy phrase, but it fits) ...

Hey there! Overall, I thought this was a good story - well written, engaging, smooth, flowing style, and easy to read. I also really like your character - the reader ...

Hahahaha - does "BHM" stand for Big High Master? Or am I waaay off? :P Sorry, I couldn't help it - just when I saw BHM I immediately thought of ...

Okay, my first question (to be asked in a very irritated tone) is... why on EARTH haven't you continued this? You're just getting to the good part! While it's true ...

Hey, there! Took me a little bit, but here I am, critiquing. I loved this story, I honestly did. Your characters were loveable, your style was engaging and clear, easy ...

Sorry, sorry! I swear I didn't even see this, even though I checked your portfolio. I must have just missed it. All I saw was nine, which I already critiqued, ...

Haha, wow. That was an interesting twist - kind of funny to see how different the series could have been if Edward was just a little less strong-willed. It would ...

Hey there! Glad to see you started this. I would say overall it does have the potential to be cheesy, but it also has the potential to be amazing, depending ...

It sounds like a good plot - the appearance of her dream-man sounds slightly cliche, though. Perhaps you did that on purpose. I'm not sure if this would be the ...

Mmm, very nice once again. (I critiqued your other one too) What you've written here is exactly like something Stephenie Meyer would have written! I can get over that. Almost...too ...

Wow! I couldn't believe how well you captured Stephenie Meyer's style! You have a really good grasp on the character's, too. I could imagine that very scene being in Twilight ...

Yeek, nice! I really enjoyed the Twilight series, and I love all these fanfics about it, from different perspectives. They really bring different ideas to the original stories, too. (people ...