sockmonkey

i found this story funny, however as it has been said before it lacks detail.teacher s should be teachers. there was some grammar errors starting at "so he used to ...

i liked your writing :)it seems like something that people could relate to .i could relate it to how i felt as a little kid before i got older and ...

wow kinda spooked me when i saw it ,i would say this is good i liked how it sounded like one of those songs they play on the radio although ...

very good job i must say,very sad but the still it seemed real to me, like i could understand what jessie thought and why although it was a little confusing ...