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thanks! i kind of feel the same way too and think i may try to add some more to leave readers hanging towards the end

Thanks! I think the spaces part was from my formatting because they're not on my actual word document, I'll have to check that out!

Wow, that's actually spot on to what i was going for!

The honesty is fine. I'm not saying that he wasn't wrong, but i also think that there are kinder ways to say things as well.

Thank you! yeah, some of the errors are solely just me breezing through things too quickly!

oh goodness, well thank you for your input. Maybe when giving someone a review try to remember that others have feelings and read over it, because you kind of sound ...

Thanks! your review actually made me laugh and not think that i was the most unoriginal writer there ever was! I will definitely try to work on Saul's appearance more ...

thanks!

Wow, i really love this! It's raw and i like that. I'm not sure Why but i love your "This is not a confessional" part, it just made me have ...