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I definatly agree with mlowe16, it really is a great poem. Someone mentioned that they thought that the last stanza should be changed to say something about how he decides ...

I really liked the poem as it had a great message but I thought that it was a little to plain as others have mentioned. Another stanza would work but ...

Hey this poem was really good and I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme. You said that you were sorry that the poem was lengthy but I disagree. Sure it's not ...

I really like the poem. There is a special message behind it. I really like the repetition of the word "inside". Even though I don't usually like poems that rhyme ...

I really liked the poem but it feel like you wrote it once and then posted it without even really editing it. I can understand where this poem is trying ...