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  • Poetry » General, General Re: how to treat a case of powdery mildew

    Being a gardener myself I might be partial towards this poem, so excuse me if I seem a little bit biased through my review. This poem is amazing. It describes ...

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If I Hear Another Christmas Song...

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    Nov 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lament

    Lament is a simple yet profound poem with a fitting name. Let me say that I think you mastered the ability to use description in this poem. I'm not quite ...

    Nov 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Girl with the Dark Wavy Hair

    I don't have much to say other than I really liked this poem. It is a simple, affectionate, and heart-warming poem of emotion. I think this properly captures that feeling ...

    Nov 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Loaded Question

    Before I start, I just wanted to say that I hope you are doing okay :) Although this poem is quite short, it has a lot to unpack. I got ...

    Nov 18, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In Boxes

    This poem is short (as most poems are), but sweet. I'd like to note your beautiful vocabulary and ability to intertwine words into a flow that is very fluid and ...

    Nov 18, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Life's Dance

    Right off the bat I'd like to appreciate your ability to build an atmosphere. Those opening sentences are everything, so it often surprises me when a writer has the ability ...

    Nov 17, 2020


I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
— William Shakespeare