smilelikeyoumeanit

Hello, i think that this is a great opening to quite an exciting book, you have already identified that this story needs expansion. i would suggest having your main character ...

So far i have only read the first paragraph of this story and i am hooked :) it grabs you straight there as soon as you start reading that there ...

hello :) i haven't read the first part of this book so sorry if i get anything wrong:) I really like the character of abigail in this story she seams ...

i'm really sorry but i don't quite understand this poem. I find it a little confusing, i understand the term of metaphor but i just don't see the links, though ...

This is a good story and i understand the fact that it is a short story and obviously i fits the scene, but it can be a little hard to ...

It's a good poem, with a good rhyme scheme but i think that it can come across a little muddled. No, I lost my balance, i think that this line ...

this is a beautiful poem i especially like the parts where you talk about your hands never moving. m y hands still, without fight. And never again will they stir ...

I love this poem. It sums everything about being lonely :) and is really genuine. I think if expanded on it a little it would be amazing :D