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OMG!!!! Thats totttally what my teacher said!!! Maybe you 2 are liek related!!!!

Terrorists dis integrating ! Ahahaha. ... I'm sorry, I couldn't resist pointing that out.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked the ending. :)

Hmm. Okay, yeah, that makes more sense. I'll see what I can do. Would it work better if I switched /1 and /2? Obviously they'd both need tweaking to fit ...

Oh, and also — I have a sneaking suspicion as to who the Supreme Evil Overlord Person will be... Hee hee. This is lovely. Singing quartet indeed.

Wow, I'm impressed. I think you're the first person who has actually listened to me about the formatting. Congratulations. You get, um, a cookie. ... now, all you have to ...

A mixture of creeping and interesting. Hurray! Some notes: - Azure. Heheh. I can't help but picture him spangled in glittery blue sequins. ;) The demon is delightfully eccentric and ...

I will make various exclamatory incoherent noises and wild hand gestures because this is so much freaking better than Wraith . I'm not going to critique this, or fishr's story ...

Okay! Thanks, guys, for reading it (or not reading it, as the case may be :P ... bookworm_9867 — perhaps you could elaborate on why it was confusing/boring?) despite my ...

You haven't? Well. I like it. :D Thanks. :) ... I did just edit the ending right now — or at least, the part that Firestarter indicated needed fixing. I'm ...

Oh, wow. I'm flattered. You must have edited the ending, because it in no way fell flat. Hee hee. No, I've yet to fix it. I'll probably take a crack ...

Snoink >> Yeah, the general consensus seems to be that the ending needs work, so I'll poke around at it a little. I do intend to give the death sequence ...

In terms of Dan Brown's questionable literary merit, I'd rather like to point everyone in the direction of this little article . *cough* Yeah, that's all.

Thanks, all. And, yay, I get a hug! "This is my fiancé," you said. Wait ... wouldn't it be fiancee (with the accent, of course) if we're talking about the ...

- Chapter Two - /1 He brings her soup in the morning. He's poured over the instructions, read them twice, and still it tastes too watery. But it's hot, and ...