smallestturtle

This is a great visual poem, but I feel like it would be better if you didn't squeeze it into a rhyme scheme. Stanzas three and four seem rougher than ...

Thank you! That's a really neat interpretation! I think I put the comma there to make it stand out as a more personal statement to the reader, but I'm not ...

It's mostly stylistic choice lol. I capitalized the lines that weren't continuations of the line before like "Do not burn but / scorch what's in your path" was a continuation. ...