slytherwin

That was very entertaining! I really enjoyed reading that. The format of the rhyming couplets made it very cute to read! However, the line "Hadn't left her in stinky shoe ...

That was phenomenal! I am legitimately in chills. All I can say is work on your phrasing. You could have made the stanzas a little clearer because it got confusing ...

I can totally see how an 8-year old would be writing this! I'd correct your grammar and the like but it's obviously intentional. Not very creative, not to knock you ...