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Re: It Starts With Heavy Metal
Hi Zombie. I agree this poem has a few flaws but I'll fix them later. I understand how you mean with the line my nose smells but since I already ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: It Starts With Heavy Metal
Hey amygabb. Thankyou so much for commenting on my poem. I agree on the word ripe now that you mention it, but I couldn't really think of a better word. ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Push
This poem is amazing. Keep writing :)
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Crystal Clear
Heaps good poem. Your words are very well used. Love it! Keep writing :)
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: You Drove Me Insane
Wow. thankyou so much for your reviews. I can't believe how impressed you all were. Honestly, i didn't think i was that good. I'll be submitting more soon. xo
Dec 6, 2011