slrowe7

I love this line: 'The messages you sent burst in me Like small water balloons filled of glee' It is a love that's lacking yet not lost, yet it bursts ...

From Google: There's a lot of sentimentality here, yet the reliability gets lost when you don't mention other outside sources. This is where you run into a rut as an ...

I am going to guesstimate that this is also a woman that knows when a fight is coming. You're building audio imagery that this is a scrappy fighter that learned ...

Thank you for using ellipses correctly in the first two lines. That was a nice use of imagery with "thrumming the ceiling" for the rain. I can already guesstimate that ...

This is a perfect poem and so knowledgable. 1. I would describe them as compost fiends. 2. It makes me feel seen that humans are not the only sentient beings ...