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Re: Setisia
I've just read your second chapter because I was impressed by your first. I think that the second is even better, and I like the slow build up of suspense, ...
Mar 10, 2007 -
Re: umm.... I'l think of one later (revised edition)
He leapt across the room with a blood curdling cry. Tamia ducked and slipped behind him. He span. He span, or he spun? And it might be blood-curdling (but I'm ...
Mar 4, 2007 -
Re: Setisia - Chapter 1 - edited
I think that your first chapter is very good story-telling. I didn't look at your age before reading, and I was astonished to find out after reading that this is ...
Mar 4, 2007